well, yeah right.....the poem is nice, the background is nice.....but the background....well umm.......it doesn't fit the poem........but, good job...try to right poems with rhymes...i also right and it was so hard to right poems with rhymes when ur not inspired....try to find ur inspiration for ur poem to have rhymes...i'll wait for ur nxt poem...^_^

the poem is nice, the background is wonderful, you ruined the background...try putting the backround only, it will look much more beautiful than it is.