| I combined two on my older poems (The Camp Fire, In The Night) for a friend, at school.
The whispering voices of the night
Echo through the hills with a sigh
As a piercing shower of stars
Make footprints in the sky.
The most glorious moon glow
Lights up the dark lake,
A jagged white mountain of vast height
Fades into dust for the sandman to take.
The mist on the lake flows away in the wind,
But it may come once more to howl at the moon,
Then flutters away without a sound
As if to say, “Good bye, I’ll see you soon.â€
Then the darkness slowly crumbles away,
And the light from the camp fire
Blankets our skin with warm delight,
It has now become a heavenly desire.
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| There are two versions of this poem.
V1
I will seek you out,
Where ever you are, and no matter how far,
Just give me a shout.
We’re talking it slow,
But I have no idea, where I should meet ya,
Or on which way we should go.
You just got to let me know.
V2
I will seek you out,
Without a doubt.
Where ever you are, and no matter how far,
Just give me a shout.
We’re talking it slow,
But how slow should we go?
I have no idea, where I should meet ya,
You just got to let me know? Or
Please let me know?
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| The once joyful playground of my youth,
Has no swings, and the slide - rusted, the wood is split and rotten.
It was a wonderous place, where balloons and ice cream was sold,
But the lost memories I am looking for will not be found in this barren wasteland now.
The earth, jagged and cluttered with litter,
Shadows from the dark clouds leave it sad and mysterious.
I just wish it could be the place it once was,
It had filled me with warm memories that are now just inside my head.
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| When I first met you
I was scared with a shiver,
And you left me without a clue
So I could not deliver.
As the days go on without you
I wake up from a dream and your image disappears
Into a fantasy that will never come true,
Like one of my worst fears.
Dreaming of with you
Makes me feel like I am up above,
Wish you felt the same way to,
My one love...
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| This poem is for one of Shayna's Wallpaper.
The oceans water is calm,
The sky is at peace.
Today it would all change,
Into dark skies and restless waves.
A silent wind blows on my face,
As I stand on the jagged rocks.
Shivering, I wish my love farewell,
The tattered white sails then float away,
I will wait ashore every day to see his face once again.
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| The silent’s of the night is passing bye,
Oh so slow into the echo of the fire.
The smoke whispering across the lake,
Throughout the valley with a shadowy glow.
The darkness slowly crumbles away,
As the flames rise up to the heavens.
The heat of the everlasting fire,
Blankets our skin with a warm delight.
This camp is ever so refreshing,
To whoever passes by for a glimmer of the fires beauty.
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| Wait till you look and see,
All the long dark tunnels inside of me.
If you new you would let it be,
There's so much darkness deep inside of me.
It conquers through me like a vast army,
How could someone as sweet as you ever love me?
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| Say goodbye to one more day,
There is nothing left to fight.
My life is one big dark room,
But you are my shining light.
I don't know much about you,
You don’t know much about me.
So will just take it slow,
I think this was meant to be.
Be with me forever,
I would not cry.
If you just got up and walk away,
I would die.
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| Faded Love
You promised me that you would always be around
Help me up when I'm feeling down,
Everything you do still hurts me
It may have something to do with how you wouldn’t let it be,
I was so discussed
But you never were trusted,
We should get a new plan of attack
I need you now, to stop me from looking back,
I’m so love drunk that I can’t find the door
Just give us something to fight for.
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| Voices of the NightI combined two on my older poems (The Camp Fire, In The Night) for a friend, at school.The whispering voices of the nightEcho through the hills with a sighAs a piercing shower of starsMake footprints in the sky.The most glorious moon glowLights up the dar...Where Should We Go From Here?There are two versions of this poem.V1I will seek you out,Where ever you are, and no matter how far,Just give me a shout.We’re talking it slow,But I have no idea, where I should meet ya,Or on which way we should go.You just got to let me know.V2I will s...Searching for Lost MemoriesThe once joyful playground of my youth,Has no swings, and the slide - rusted, the wood is split and rotten. It was a wonderous place, where balloons and ice cream was sold, But the lost memories I am looking for will not be found in this barren wasteland ...My One LoveWhen I first met youI was scared with a shiver,And you left me without a clueSo I could not deliver.As the days go on without youI wake up from a dream and your image disappearsInto a fantasy that will never come true,Like one of my worst fears.Dreaming o...FarewellThis poem is for one of Shayna's Wallpaper.The oceans water is calm,The sky is at peace.Today it would all change,Into dark skies and restless waves.A silent wind blows on my face,As I stand on the jagged rocks.Shivering, I wish my love farewell,The tatt...The Camp FireThe silent’s of the night is passing bye,Oh so slow into the echo of the fire.The smoke whispering across the lake,Throughout the valley with a shadowy glow.The darkness slowly crumbles away,As the flames rise up to the heavens.The heat of the everlasti...Darkness Inside MeWait till you look and see,All the long dark tunnels inside of me.If you new you would let it be,There's so much darkness deep inside of me.It conquers through me like a vast army,How could someone as sweet as you ever love me?...A GirlSay goodbye to one more day,There is nothing left to fight.My life is one big dark room,But you are my shining light.I don't know much about you,You don’t know much about me.So will just take it slow,I think this was meant to be.Be with me forever,I wo...I like this oneI like this poem or short story you have here. Hope you'll get a chance to read some of mine. ...Faded LoveFaded LoveYou promised me that you would always be around Help me up when I'm feeling down,Everything you do still hurts meIt may have something to do with how you wouldn’t let it be,I was so discussed But you never were trusted,We should get a new ...In The NightThe Whispering voices of the nightEcho through the hills,As a piercing shower of starsMake footprints in the night’s sky,The most glorious moon glowLights up the dark lake,A jagged white mountain of vast heightFades into dust over time,The mist on the l...Missing YouThe stars twinkle not I miss you a whole lot Gloomy and joyless are my daysBoring and lonely are my waysTo that I will add My days are also very sadWhen I am missing you...PoemsMy Creative Writing class has just finish poetry and I found it very interesting and I found that it was kind of fun. So I have decided to share some of my poems that I wrote with all of the DN members. I am doing this so you can enjoy them, so please do ... Recently Spotted MembersNo members found. Be the first. |
