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Introduction

In a world of terrorism, war, famine, and crime, it is often difficult to believe that love exists. And it is sometimes far easier to believe that hatred far outweighs the presence of love. But the fact remains, hate isn’t more prominent than love. Sometimes, hate is just easier to see. Boy A punches Boy B anger and hatred. Simple. Obvious. A unified equation. But that doesn’t mean love isn’t present in the situation too. Love exists in the boy who shows self pride and forgiveness and doesn’t punch back. Love exists in the woman who patches up a sad boy’s face. Love exists in the antagonist who later feels guilt. Love exists. Love really does make the world go round if you know where to look.

First point
If you follow the news media, you might be sceptical of my essayhelp claim. The headlines are filled with robberies, murders, and general destruction. But that’s just sensationalism. People love action and adventure, and even intrigue. But look at any newspaper and you’ll find love you just might have to look deeper than the opening headline. You’ll see love written into farewell obituaries, and people searching for lost pets. You’ll see it in wedding pictures, and through the dedication people place into writing articles. You’ll read about it in letters to the editor, where people show passion for a topic, and in charity auction notices.

Second point
Love songs prove that love is complicated and that it isn’t always easy to understand. But it is a fascinating phenomenon that exists, none-the-less. Think of Celine Dion’s “My Heart Will Go On,” which describes undying love or think of Gloria Gaynor’s famous, “I Will Survive” which demonstrates the strength of self-love. Think even of Gene Kelly’s “Singing in the Rain,” which illustrates the love of a moment. Songs might not describe simple love, or love without complications, but they do describe love far more often then they describe hatred.

Third point
When I think of love, I think of my family. Truth-be-told, I think of their annoying habits, but the presence of love surrounds those thoughts too. I love my family and they love me. My friends, who I trust dearly, I think of as family too. The family dynamic has lived on since the beginning of time and shows no sign of stopping. The structure might change, from marriage to common-law, or two parents to one, but there will always be people living together, sharing moments, helping one another, loving life’s idiosyncrasies through friendship, trust, and affection.

Conclusion
Some days, especially when there’s rain or snow, it is easier to think of the negative, and dwell on hatred and despair. But love is there, all around us, just waiting to be recognized. It exists in the news media, hidden behind more glorified topics, and in the songs we listen to every day. Love is in family, friends, and all the relationships we respect and cherish. Love exists, and makes the world move forward with hope and ambition.

Thesis statement example

This essay is about love, but not just simply the existence of love, but how it can be difficult to recognize sometimes. The thesis of this essay shares the fact that love exists and moves the world forward “if you know where to look”. The essay continues past the thesis statement, showing where love exists in the daily world and the disguises (like news media) that it sometimes hides behind. The main point of the essay (the thesis) is developed through three main topics, which are summarized in the conclusion of the essay.
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